Latok/Elf-WhiteDragonTouched/Ranger/Creation [Closed, moved to Feytouched app]
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Sound more like a Feytouched than a Dragontouched, granted we don't have a feytouched subrace.
He is aware moon elves can be extremely pale right? If its just for the appearance this doesn't need to be a subrace. It reads more like dragontouched being tacked on to be more special, rather than it being an important part of the story.
I'd find it more interesting if they weren't a dragontouched but an elf who was seduced or tricked by the Winter Court.
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@Voss_ said in Latok/Elf-WhiteDragonTouched/Ranger/Creation:
He is aware moon elves can be extremely pale right? If its just for the appearance this doesn't need to be a subrace. It reads more like dragontouched being tacked on to be more special, rather than it being an important part of the story.
agreed
@Voss_ said in Latok/Elf-WhiteDragonTouched/Ranger/Creation:
I'd find it more interesting if they weren't a dragontouched but an elf who was seduced or tricked by the Winter Court.
very much so
"You can complain if you weren't asked; you can't complain if you were asked but didn't contribute." ~ Professor.
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That’s part of the struggle for him, if we had fey touched he would app for it but he’s just working with the tools we have :)
I agree with the appearance point tho
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We don't have fey-touched but this story can still be told without that subrace.
Instead the Wintercourt could be worked into the background and we could give them something like a trinket or mark to represent those ties.
However if the point of the app was more that they wanted to play a White Dragontouched then my feedback is to rewrite the app to focus more on roleplaying that.
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Reach out to him and ask where his preferences lie.
Honestly, adding a fey-touched subrace would not be terrible at this point. We would just need to agree to the stats. -
@Voss_ said in Latok/Elf-WhiteDragonTouched/Ranger/Creation:
We don't have fey-touched but this story can still be told without that subrace.
Instead the Wintercourt could be worked into the background and we could give them something like a trinket or mark to represent those ties.
However if the point of the app was more that they wanted to play a White Dragontouched then my feedback is to rewrite the app to focus more on roleplaying that.
Point of the app is to do something interesting with the winter court and have it make sense why an elf would be outcasted to the stormhorns essentially.
I think we’ve needed feytouched for a long time honestly. If it is as easy as echo says to implement, I think it would be good for the server.
The player said they would be fine removing the white dragon touched part and have it replaced with a mark.
I’d suggest the mark to have some good uses and maybe some flaws. But also serve as to why their appearance may be altered so that there is some fun rp and mystery to be had
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Or we can add a Feytouched subrace?
It can take 30min at most. -
Would love that and I’m sure he would too
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If we can add Feytouched that'd be sweet.
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Did anyone ask him if he would prefer fey touched?
"You can complain if you weren't asked; you can't complain if you were asked but didn't contribute." ~ Professor.
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I did, he would love to go with fey touched if possible. And rework the background accordingly
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Feytouched is implemented.
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E Echo moved this topic from Applications & Player Notes on
