SturdyRageFists /Character name: Marcus Raulbane/Race: Dragon Touched - Red
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6:25 PM] onimisho: Topic Title: SturdyRageFists /Character name: Marcus Raulbane/Race: Dragon Touched - Red
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Race:Dragon Touched – Red /Class: Fighter / Alignment:LN / Level: 4/ Name: Marcus Raulbane
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What you are applying for: Race ( Dragon Touched - Red)
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General outline of Goals, Plans, or Story lines to Pursue
build up a power base and become a noble with a positive renown.
-I will have to talk with people and have them support the idea of a Dragon Touched as a Noble.
-I need to make money, by crafting and questing. Building up a wealth to partition a title of nobility.
To Grow my hoard
-create a place I can gather everything I consider my hoard.
-achieve an unhealthy level of gold, magic items, and knowledge. Then collect more....
Seeking out Raulvalosbahorsurrtraint, the red dragon that tainted Marcus as a kid.
- asking around about dragons, and putting out feelers for any knowledge of a Red Dragon or anyone going by the names of Raul Valos Bahor Surr or Traint.
- Brief background of the character
Marcus was orphaned at a young age, and taken in by a man calling himself Raul. Raul was a rather heavy handed man and pushed Marcus to do his very best or better. It was as a young adult that Marcus began to see the signs of what Raul was doing to him, and upon confrontation, what Raul really was.
Raul was Raulvalosbahorsurrtraint an ancient red dragon who was slowly feeding his blood to Marcus to increase his physical abilities. Marcus never found out why, a red dragon of all things not only spared him but trained him but Marcus believed that this creature was responsible for him becoming an orphan.
From this moment on, Marcus would do everything in his power to amass the power that would be needed to take it down. An army, which means he needed to gain title, and political power....
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This reads like a red dragon.
I approve.
Sturdy has grown quite a bit as a roleplayer and I like what I am seeing.
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Opps. Thought posted and voted. Yes, I agree. This application if much better than what he presented me with earlier for a Earth Genasi
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Nothing about the app particularly excites me :/
There's no risks being taken. It's basically just a crafting PC with a subrace and the most vanilla alignment of all time.
Maybe I'm just a grumpy old Moloch disciple like they all say, it just doesn't seem very interesting.
I feel like I'm going to get an inbox full of requests to drop 20 iron longswords with X faction to get their support to fight a red dragon that for all intents and purposes doesn't actually exist IG, followed by 100k gold and a demand for a specially made lair.
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This is shit sprinkled into a puddle of dog piss
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- talk to people
- craft to make gold
- quest to make gold
- gather lots of loot
- find a red dragon
no from me
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Gotcha. Happy to clamp down on these subrace applications. Fine with changing to no based on team feedback.
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Spoke to them.
10:41 AM] onimisho: I think I may have jumped the gun putting in the application by a lot. My temporary character kind of took on a life of its own and I'm thinking of scrapping the application and just making the throwaway my main
They are scrapping this app. I was gonna help them make it gooder, but they decided to jus play a normal character, so that's cool.
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