[Set] TheShadow/Feliyah/Dragon Touched Barbarian (Bronze)
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I was sent an app from a player via Discord, posted below:
Dragon-Touched(Human)/Barbarian/CG/4/Feliyah). Dragon-Touched (Bronze)
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Feliyah will be exploring the server and leading parties to hard to reach or dangerous locations, hunting dangerous (evil!) monsters / organizations and slaying them. Her goal is to accomplish notable enough feats to draw the attention of a bronze dragon and understand her heritage.
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Feliyah’s “Rage” is her ability to tap into her bloodlines power - the zeal of a bronze dragon towards ‘Justice’. An instinctual desire to do what she sees as Right, without regard for the law. This, combined with her own background of having fled sembia after angering one too many corrupt families, will likely lead to conflict with any evil organizations and is intrinsic to her character.
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Feliyah should be larger than a normal human, at 1.15 or “larger” than normally available. She’d also have the horned head.
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It seems pretty straightforward but I like that there aren't any typos. We've never had problems with this player, right?
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I'm not sure who the player is, but I also like that it is grammatically correct.
I'm sure the Precept would like to get ahold of this one! -
Sounds fun, good app in general even if its simple
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The app is... Fine..
Probably could have written "good adventurer" though.But I can't find anything wrong with it and it technically meets the spec.
(No that I'm voting I'm just dissapointed I can't tear this one a new one)
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Back in the old days, an app like this used to have 8 specific goals, and be about a thousand words...!
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@salem said in TheShadow/Feliyah/Dragon Touched Barbarian (Bronze):
Back in the old days, an app like this used to have 8 specific goals, and be about a thousand words...!
Back in my day...
Gods I hated those apps. I prefer short and to the point, more than rambling on. -
Calling this approved?
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yup
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set
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P Puffy moved this topic from Applications & Player Notes on 3 Jul 2022, 08:16