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    [Set] TheShadow/Feliyah/Dragon Touched Barbarian (Bronze)

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    • SalemS
      Salem
      last edited by SpiffyMeister

      I was sent an app from a player via Discord, posted below:

      Dragon-Touched(Human)/Barbarian/CG/4/Feliyah). Dragon-Touched (Bronze)

      • Feliyah will be exploring the server and leading parties to hard to reach or dangerous locations, hunting dangerous (evil!) monsters / organizations and slaying them. Her goal is to accomplish notable enough feats to draw the attention of a bronze dragon and understand her heritage.

      • Feliyah’s “Rage” is her ability to tap into her bloodlines power - the zeal of a bronze dragon towards ‘Justice’. An instinctual desire to do what she sees as Right, without regard for the law. This, combined with her own background of having fled sembia after angering one too many corrupt families, will likely lead to conflict with any evil organizations and is intrinsic to her character.

      • Feliyah should be larger than a normal human, at 1.15 or “larger” than normally available. She’d also have the horned head.

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      • Man in the MistM
        Man in the Mist
        last edited by

        It seems pretty straightforward but I like that there aren't any typos. We've never had problems with this player, right?

        I had visions, I was in them;
        I was looking into the mirror,
        to see a little bit clearer,
        the rottenness and evil in me.

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        • EchoE
          Echo
          last edited by

          I'm not sure who the player is, but I also like that it is grammatically correct.
          I'm sure the Precept would like to get ahold of this one!

          "You can complain if you weren't asked; you can't complain if you were asked but didn't contribute." ~ Professor.

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          • PuffyP
            Puffy @Echo
            last edited by

            Sounds fun, good app in general even if its simple

            @SpiffyMeister
            the real bench mark for success is if you seduce a puffy pc or npc
            @Prof-Misclick
            Puffy said "Don't you trust me? Then vote yes NERD!"
            #scaredofstrongwomen

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            • ZoolZ
              Zool
              last edited by

              The app is... Fine..
              Probably could have written "good adventurer" though.

              But I can't find anything wrong with it and it technically meets the spec.

              (No that I'm voting I'm just dissapointed I can't tear this one a new one)

              > !!!MOLES for the MOLE GOD!!!

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              • SalemS
                Salem
                last edited by

                Back in the old days, an app like this used to have 8 specific goals, and be about a thousand words...!

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                • SalemS
                  Salem
                  last edited by

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                  • EchoE
                    Echo @Salem
                    last edited by

                    @salem said in TheShadow/Feliyah/Dragon Touched Barbarian (Bronze):

                    Back in the old days, an app like this used to have 8 specific goals, and be about a thousand words...!

                    Back in my day...
                    Gods I hated those apps. I prefer short and to the point, more than rambling on.

                    "You can complain if you weren't asked; you can't complain if you were asked but didn't contribute." ~ Professor.

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                    • SpiffyMeisterS
                      SpiffyMeister
                      last edited by

                      Calling this approved?

                      Puffy's bumbling Scum-goblin minion.

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                      • EchoE
                        Echo
                        last edited by

                        yup

                        "You can complain if you weren't asked; you can't complain if you were asked but didn't contribute." ~ Professor.

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                        • SpiffyMeisterS
                          SpiffyMeister
                          last edited by

                          set

                          Puffy's bumbling Scum-goblin minion.

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